17 Report on the completion of revision




 I'm happy to report that I made some major changes to the story as I completed the revision.
 First of all, I've made the basis of the story to be the journey of Nacht and Aisha together. It's a bit forced, but the development of Aisha's relationship with Nahat is based on a master-slave contract. We've also made a few changes to his character, including the addition of several double lines and Nacht's current state of acceptance of being a woman.

 Next, let's talk about Duran. In rewriting the story, I found a lot of similarities between the two, which led me to make some major changes to Duran's setting. In addition, the depiction of the battles was also influenced by some points, so I had to rewrite most of them. In addition, we added a double line for Duran as well.

 In addition, we've also made some minor changes, such as the elimination of spatio-temporal attributes, changes to similar dialogue, and changes to item grades and names.

 On top of that, we haven't made any major changes to the story itself. I have written a complete change to the prologue, but since it would destroy the very foundation of the story of Aisha, I've decided to keep it as it is, and to make minor changes to the description.

 I've made these changes, and I'm sure there are those who would say, "No, it hasn't changed at all, don't joke about it," and those who would say, "Too many changes, don't joke about it. I would like to take this opportunity to apologize for causing you any discomfort, and I hope you will quietly close your browser. We ask that you leave the final decision to the operator.

 Please understand that the author is entirely responsible for all the trouble he's caused, and the readers who gave us their opinions are not responsible at all. I apologize once again for causing readers to feel dissatisfied by the author's selfishness, even though he should have just revised the manuscript to reflect the similarities between the two, since he hadn't received a warning from the management. I believe there were many inappropriate comments in the multiple changes of opinion. I would like to apologize again.

 I would also like to apologize for deleting some of the comments and opinions I received due to the author's emotional instability. If this novel continues to run for a month or two without being deleted, I will try to receive your feedback again, but I will not reply to you. Also, please understand that depending on the situation, I may have to stop receiving feedback again.

 Finally, I would like to apologize for any trouble I have caused you due to my immature work and even more immature author.
 I'm really sorry.